I want honest feedback on my oc

I have seen some people talk about giving oc's too much trauma or making it too edgy I want so honest feedback on my oc please give honest criticism

P.s I'm a very new writer

1 also heard expanding him outside of just his trauma helps

Caleb Hayes age 12 (my Star Wars oc)

1. Parental Abandonment His parents left him due to their bounties, due to not wanting to get him killed

2. Verbal Abuse from his boss Worked under he, who constantly belittled and mistreated him. (I'm probably taking this one out now)

3. Survival Struggle Often had to steal just to eat (btw this was before he was adopted my another one of my oc's)

4. Trust Issues l Adults have used or betrayed him before, making him wary of trusting anyone. But (this later goes away)

5. Two Panic Attacks Under extreme stress, he has frozen up and struggled to breathe twice.(this was at 2 different stages at his life)

Hobbies / Interests

1. Tinkering with Junk he Likes messing with old tech and scrap, making small gadgets or tools.

2. Climbing / Parkour he Often climbs buildings or junk piles, both for fun

3. Listening to his battle droid tell Stories he Enjoys hearing him ramble about old Clone Wars battles.

4. Card Games / Dice Games

5. Collecting Small Things he Keeps random trinkets in a small pouch, even if they are worthless

6.Dreams of Piloting when he is older