Be brutally honest, how can I do better?

Some of the coloration is weird, that’s because originally I didn’t think there would be any but decided to add it(yes the second eye is scared and closed because I am a victim of the second eye curse). I’m overall happy but want to do better. And yes, she is a lefty that’s intentional

Some of the coloration is weird, that’s because originally I didn’t think there would be any but decided to add it(yes the second eye is scared and closed because I am a victim of the second eye curse). I’m overall happy but want to do better. And yes, she is a lefty that’s intentional